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Eigo Terumi S-rank Missing-Nin
Posts : 49 Join date : 2010-04-18 Age : 26 Location : Peterborough, England
| Subject: Shoujin Clan 18th April 2010, 04:42 | |
| Name: Shoujin Kekkei Genkai Ranton. From birth, each member of the Shoujin clan has a third eye located on his or her forehead. The eye shall remain closed until certain emotional requirements are fulfilled. When the eye opens, it will reveal a bright yellow iris with a purple pupil. Around the iris is a mauve swirl. The Third Eye, gives the user a great boost in range, allowing them to see almost 25% further than usual but only in a straight line, the eye also has the function of zooming in to small objects to great detail. The Eye would give its users control over the Ranton Element also known as Storm Release. Originally being a fusion of Raiton and Suiton, the element is usually beams of lightning which flows like water. Users can create the flowing beams using chakra but it is almost always easier to transform a liquid. The eye also has a second stage, which is usually activated at Jounin level. The second stage eye will look almost exactly the same as the last except for the lack of mauve swirl, a user of the second stage eye will have their range of vision 50% greater than usual and it is no longer limited to a straight line, only users of this eye can use the clan’s most devastating jutsu. Ranton techniques do not have any strenghts or weaknesess against other elements. Secret Clan Jutsu:- Spoiler:
Name: Sensory Deactivation Technique
Rank: D, B and A
Type: Genjutsu
Element:
Description: Using chakra, the user can send a pulse of electricity in to the never system of an enemy. The first stage of the technique which is used by most Genin, will shutdown the opponents sense of sight for 1 post. The second stage used by most Chuunin will shutdown the opponent’s sense of sight and hearing for two posts, making it incredibly difficult to interact with another shinobi. The third most powerful form of this jutsu would deactivate an enemy’s sense of sight, hearing and smell for five posts. The Genjutsu will deactivate when the one trapped in the Genjutsu, is hit with a considerable amount of force (like a punch or kick).
Name: Liquid Alteration Technique
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Ranton
Description: Using his eye he can focus on even the tiniest droplets of liquid around him and infuse it with electric chakra, he can control it to damage an opponent which is usually mild and mostly annoying. The Ranton, can stay in place for his use for other jutsu.
Name: Storm Clone Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Ranton
Description: This jutsu creates a copy of the user, which barely affects the environment making it very simple to spot but if it is touched by somebody other than the user, it will give them a mild electrical shock, if destroyed by a jutsu there is a chance that the liquid like body of the clone would splash on to somebody and also give them an electrical shock.
Name: Flash Flood Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Ranton
Description: The user will release a large body of energy which will flow like a river towards an opponent at speeds of 30 MpH, the energy will explode on impact with a moving object but on a molecular level (not moving on a molecular level but the actually explosion), practically anihallating it if no strain is put in. Against another shinobi the damage will be rather minimal, but might cause quite a bit of harm to Genin or Academy Students. Jounin or above, will be able to take in the blast with relative ease.
Name: Laser Shower
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Ranton
Description: The user will generate a sphere of energy which when released in the skies will scatter in to several small burts of energy which will rain down from the skies homing in to a target and exploding on impact. The attack is very difficult to measure as the user can either choose to create multiple, speedy shots or a couple of powerful ones but overall they will do the same amount of damage if they all hit.
Name: Radiant Rapids
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Ranton
Description: The user will focus at an area with their Third Eye, after doing a string of handseals a ball of light energy will begin to form from the droplets of liquid around the area (if none exists, the user would have to create their own) which then fall upon the area like water sending a surge of electrical energy at the area when hit, if somebody is hit by the electricity they will be stunned for 2 posts.
Second Stage Jutsu
Name: Majestic Roar
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Ranton
Description: By closing the Right Normal Eye (both others open), the user will project an image a large lion created from Ranton chakra, the lion will charge at whatever the Third Eye, looks at and will move at amazing speeds. Being of a liquid base, the lion will be able to momentarily change form to get through different objects, once the user is ready the lion will detonate leaving large amounts of Ranton droplets in the air and doing considerable damage. The circumference of the explosion will be roughly ten meters.
Name: Omoikane
Rank: A
Type: Genjutsu
Element: Ranton
Description: By closing the Left Normal Eye (both others open), the user will transform a trace amount of blood cells in to Ranton energy, these will pass in to the nerve system, shutting down the users sense of pain for 5 posts. The user will also have a layer of Ranton energy around themselves to lower the amount of damage done to their body by using the energy to destroy any small objects which come in contact with the user.
Name: Hachiman
Rank: S Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Ranton
Description:The user will be able to convert their body in to Ranton energy, while still retaining control and shape of their body. The user will be safe from injury while using this jutsu and their speed will be increased by 75%. The user will also hold the properties of a liquid being able to fit through objects they wouldn't have before. While in this form, whenever the user hits an object, a powerful surge of electrical energy will run through the object, damaging them considerably. Coupled with Taijutsu, this jutsu is incredibly powerful. History : A long time prior to the creation of the clan, a secretive society which resided high in the mountains of Kumogakure. The society’s actions were considered dangerous to the village and its leader, Kinto Shoujin, was assassinated by a team of ANBU led by the Shodai Raikage, this created a large divide in the organization, both sides with a different candidate for the new leader. After years of battle, the winning side exiled the other to the out most parts of the mountains. The humiliated and defeated side’s leader, Ryu Shoujin sacrificed two of his own men to obtain both their chakra affinities. Using a powerful, dark kinjutsu he was able to infuse his chakra-less body with the Raiton and Suiton element. The fusion of elements created the Ranton Element but as punishment for the sacrifices he had made for his own strength, the god who placed the elements inside Aito cursed him with the appearance of a third eye. Aito and his men led an attack against the other society members, annihalting them completely. The Nindaime Raikage decided to send a team of his most powerful Jounin to capture Ryu and his men, a small few members were able to flee and spread the clan across the shinobi world. Those who remained in Kumogakure were able to strike a peace treaty with the Nindaime Raikage which allowed them to stay in the mountains but were not allowed to enter the main village until the end of Yondaime's reign. Because of the treaty, the Shoujin are still living high on the mountain side awaiting the Yondaime's death.
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| | | Midnight Hokage
Posts : 286 Join date : 2010-03-24 Age : 26 Location : A secret room in my underwear case
| Subject: Re: Shoujin Clan 18th April 2010, 05:10 | |
| - Spoiler:
Name: Flash Flood Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Ranton
Description: The user will release a large body of energy which will flow like a river towards an opponent, the energy will explode on impact with a moving object.
Name: Laser Shower
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Ranton
Description: The user will generate a sphere of energy which when released in the skies will scatter in to several small burts of energy which will rain down from the skies homing in to a target and exploding on impact.
Name: Radiant Rapids
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Ranton
Description: The user will focus at an area with their Third Eye, after doing a string of handseals a ball of light energy will begin to form from the droplets of liquid around the area (if none exists, the user would have to create their own) which then fall upon the area like water sending a surge of electrical energy at the area when hit.
Name: Majestic Roar
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Ranton
Description: By closing the Right Normal Eye (both others open), the user will project an image a large lion created from Ranton chakra, the lion will charge at whatever the Third Eye, looks at and will move at amazing speeds. Being of a liquid base, the lion will be able to momentarily change form to get through different objects, once the user is ready the lion will detonate leaving large amounts of Ranton droplets in the air and doing considerable damage.
Name: Omoikane
Rank: A
Type: Genjutsu
Element: Ranton
Description: By closing the Left Normal Eye (both others open), the user will transform a trace amount of blood cells in to Ranton energy, these will pass in to the nerve system, shutting down the users sense of pain for 5 posts. The user will also have a layer of Ranton energy around themselves to lower the amount of damage done to their body.
Name: Hachiman
Rank: S Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Ranton
Description:The user will be able to convert their body in to Ranton energy, while still retaining control and shape of their body. The user will be safe from injury while using this jutsu and their speed will be increased by 100%. The user will also hold the properties of a liquid being able to fit through objects they wouldn't have before. While in this form the users strength will increase by almost 25%, coupled with Taijutsu this is a formidable attack. When the user runs out of chakra, they will return to their normal form but will feel extremely drained.
For all jutsu, take away the extra empty lines. It makes the application clearer. Flash Flood: How large is the beam? How fast does it travel? How large is the explosion? Laser Shower: How many beams are created? How large are the explosions? Radiant Rapids: How strong is the electrical surge? Majestic Roar: How large is the explosion? Omoikane: How does a layer of energy protect you from damage? Hachiman: I think converting your body to energy would be a completely separate KKG. | |
| | | Eigo Terumi S-rank Missing-Nin
Posts : 49 Join date : 2010-04-18 Age : 26 Location : Peterborough, England
| Subject: Umm 18th April 2010, 05:14 | |
| I'll change it but Hachiman is like really important to the character, Ranton is made of Water and Lightning, so I am basically using the fact that the human body is mostly made of water. I used the word energy because I didn't really know what to call the Ranton (as it isn't anything like ice or steam) | |
| | | Midnight Hokage
Posts : 286 Join date : 2010-03-24 Age : 26 Location : A secret room in my underwear case
| Subject: Re: Shoujin Clan 18th April 2010, 05:18 | |
| Okay, I'll allow Hachiman, but a speed boost of 100% would be pretty OP, even if it was realistic as you're energy, and instead of getting a 25% strength boost I think you should electrify opponents on contact or something like that. | |
| | | Eigo Terumi S-rank Missing-Nin
Posts : 49 Join date : 2010-04-18 Age : 26 Location : Peterborough, England
| Subject: Done 18th April 2010, 07:44 | |
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| | | Midnight Hokage
Posts : 286 Join date : 2010-03-24 Age : 26 Location : A secret room in my underwear case
| Subject: Re: Shoujin Clan 18th April 2010, 07:51 | |
| Hmm... I think it's fine now.
Approved~ | |
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